Tricksters

(First time giving a critique, but I really like this drawing so I figure it could help out!)

I really adore your style in this, they look happy and carefree as a trickster should be. I like the way you made Roxy jumping a bit with a pointed toe, it adds to the hyperactive state that Tricksters are in. Though, the placing of Roxy's left hand seems a bit weird to me, if it was upward it'd add to the hyperactivity, or maybe behind her and with her fingers spread would have been better since Roxy is extremely drunk in her Trickster state. Jane's hand also looks a bit odd to me, maybe it's because of it's perspective and the way the lollipop is tilted? If it was facing moreso to the left it would be better, I believe.

As for the shading, it adds to the chaotic way of the Trickster nature so I really like it! Especially the shading on the girls' skirts. But, i will say you could have smoothed a few areas of the shading/highlighting. :3

Overall, this is a truly magnificent piece and I absolutely adore it. I give you thumbs up to the maximum and I hope you do more trickster art like this! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>